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monday was a really funny and good and long day...

model _ Jürgen (thanks for claimbing the wall)

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Critique by *unordinalwhimsey May 2, 2009, 7:15:24 PM

I've heard this critique before and it seems to apply, if you want to keep the focus on the plant containing the person, soften the top edge of the picture so that the eyes come back to the focus. Also I think a wide view of this picture without as much of the wall (going up) would be more flattering, but, I could be wrong, you'll have to use your judgment on that. I love how the bush is sorta eating the person, and I love how the bush has a hand extending up the wall. I also see he has a head, which is great, the vine thing almost reminds me of one of the bad guy characters on Toy Story, lol. Quite fun

One thing that would be cool to try is standing on a ladder and looking down. Instead of the wall appearing to curve away and backwards, it might appear to curve in to the model.

What do you think?

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~bozhena Dec 18, 2010

very nice !

*MissUmlaut Aug 10, 2010 Photographer

This makes me smile without cause

~alexandrajitariuc Feb 16, 2010 Student Photographer

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~oOgreengingerOo Apr 25, 2009

The ivy in this shot reminds me of a shadowed figure creeping up on someone with his outstretched. And then the subject's hands would be like binoculars. I don't know, I just get a kind of 'Look out behind you!' vibe from this picture.Very neat idea and execution!

~mod-juliet Apr 22, 2009

really creative idea

~Jazzhead Apr 19, 2009

So cool! NIce

*isamon Apr 18, 2009 Student Photographer

haha, brilliant as always

~anjusha Apr 18, 2009

excellent,,bravoooo

~aizaaaa Apr 17, 2009

amazing ..

~mlopez Apr 17, 2009 Photographer

die farbversion gefällt mir viel besser!
sehr fein.
erinnert mich von den motiv und den tonalitäten sowie der farben an zwei fotografen die dir vielleicht gefallen könnten.

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