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monday was a really funny and good and long day...

model _ Jürgen (thanks for claimbing the wall)

color version.
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:iconunordinalwhimsey:
I've heard this critique before and it seems to apply, if you want to keep the focus on the plant containing the person, soften the top edge of the picture so that the eyes come back to the focus. Also I think a wide view of this picture without as much of the wall (going up) would be more flattering, but, I could be wrong, you'll have to use your judgment on that. I love how the bush is sorta eating the person, and I love how the bush has a hand extending up the wall. I also see he has a head, which is great, the vine thing almost reminds me of one of the bad guy characters on Toy Story, lol. Quite fun :D
One thing that would be cool to try is standing on a ladder and looking down. Instead of the wall appearing to curve away and backwards, it might appear to curve in to the model.
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bozhena Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2010
very nice !
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MissUmlaut Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010   Photographer
This makes me smile without cause ;).
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alexandrajitariuc Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2010  Student Photographer
featured: [link]

:heart:
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oOgreengingerOo Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2009
The ivy in this shot reminds me of a shadowed figure creeping up on someone with his outstretched. And then the subject's hands would be like binoculars. I don't know, I just get a kind of 'Look out behind you!' vibe from this picture.Very neat idea and execution!
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mod-juliet Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2009
really creative idea
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Jazzhead Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2009
So cool! NIce
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:iconisamon:
isamon Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2009  Student Photographer
haha, brilliant as always :clap:
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anjusha Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2009
excellent,,bravoooo
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aizaaaa Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2009
amazing ..
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:iconmlopez:
mlopez Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2009   Photographer
die farbversion gefällt mir viel besser!
sehr fein.
erinnert mich von den motiv und den tonalitäten sowie der farben an zwei fotografen die dir vielleicht gefallen könnten.

zufälligerweise zwei schweden ;)

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gnato Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2009  Professional Photographer
wieder zwei feine fotos : )ist immer eine freude links von dir zu kriegen : )
wir müssen mal wieder fotografieren gehen ;)
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:iconinfinityloop:
infinityloop Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2009   Photographer
fun and creative
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:iconjsut:
jsut Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
It is much better colored. I like the composition of this one much more, as well.
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:iconsilverbugs:
silverbugs Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2009
this is great and very interesting! :)
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:iconranita-noe:
rAnita-nOe Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2009
very original.
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xxpixiedust Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
I love it when you take such photos. They always make me smile :D :+fav:
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FlexDreams Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2009  Professional Photographer
wow!
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