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monday was a really funny and good and long day...

model _ Jürgen (thanks for claimbing the wall)

color version.

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=Emmie-Lynne May 2, 2009, 6:15:24 PM
I've heard this critique before and it seems to apply, if you want to keep the focus on the plant containing the person, soften the top edge of the picture so that the eyes come back to the focus. Also I think a wide view of this picture without as much of the wall (going up) would be more flattering, but, I could be wrong, you'll have to use your judgment on that. I love how the bush is sorta eating the person, and I love how the bush has a hand extending up the wall. I also see he has a head, which is great, the vine thing almost reminds me of one of the bad guy characters on Toy Story, lol. Quite fun :D
One thing that would be cool to try is standing on a ladder and looking down. Instead of the wall appearing to curve away and backwards, it might appear to curve in to the model.
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~xxpixiedust Apr 17, 2009, 6:53:14 AM
I love it when you take such photos. They always make me smile :D :+fav:

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~silverbugs Apr 17, 2009, 7:58:41 AM
this is great and very interesting! :)
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*jsut Apr 17, 2009, 9:44:23 AM
It is much better colored. I like the composition of this one much more, as well.

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~infinityloop Apr 17, 2009, 9:44:38 AM
fun and creative

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~mlopez Apr 17, 2009, 10:24:40 AM
die farbversion gefällt mir viel besser!
sehr fein.
erinnert mich von den motiv und den tonalitäten sowie der farben an zwei fotografen die dir vielleicht gefallen könnten.

zufälligerweise zwei schweden ;)

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`gnato Apr 17, 2009, 11:06:02 AM
wieder zwei feine fotos : )ist immer eine freude links von dir zu kriegen : )
wir müssen mal wieder fotografieren gehen ;)

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