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©2009 `gnato
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simple architecture

vienna city

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:iconsuerdas:
There is something in this image that i love... and there's also some other thing that bothers me... when i look for a long time to the image, my head gets the need to bend left a bit...

it is an architectural shot taken with a raised head perspective... and in an architectural image, the eye searches for the perpendicular lines... and because of the wide angle, the lines have the tendency to spread in radial directions... so one got to control these radial lines..

and in this image, these lines act (in the case of balance) to be symmetrical... however we just see the building from a bit left... so, if u have centered your building, you could get a more balanced photograph... however in this case my eye searches for the missing part, because the image is very symmetrical but not exact...

so if u had guided the perpendicular lines in the 1/3 of the image, and didnot try to achieve a symmetry, then you could have a more balanced image...

and in the positive side, the color of the sky is pale but yet strong.. and it is perfect... the brightness in the horizon is stunning... and the placement of the horizon is also very good chosen... and the "tag" on the door, is like yours...

and i liked the photograph very much... :thumbsup:
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:icongreedy-dood:
Hab den Mistkübel gesehen und dacht mir das kann nur Wien sein. ;)

Wo hast du das Foto gemacht?
:iconiljanalion:
evolution of a tower?

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:icongnato:
im 15, in der nähe von u3 hütteldorferstrasse

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:iconniesbane:
Huh! We have a building like this in Edmonton too, although not nearly as cool.
:iconmadson011:
once again another great piece on the many beautiful buildings of Eu.

did you use a neutral density filter.
:icongnato:
no i dont use it

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:iconmadson011:
interesting, the clouds seemed really blue at the top
:iconlittle-billie:
amazing :) - can't believe this is Vienna

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Mar 12, 2009, 9:51:03 AM

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