I think you have great composition and a really nice diagional going through your piece that adds a great deal of visual interest and feeling. In film, a lot of time the camera is held at a tilt, to cause a sense of unease and worry, which I feel you're mimicing here, using the already old, and somewhat decrepit buildings, held in a certain way, to provoke that same emotion. If I could see one thing done differently, it would be to have you darken the picture as a whole. I feel the intense bright of it off sets the feel and style of the rest of your piece, almost as though you've lost some of the texture and contrast because of your current choice. As a whole though, very nicely done, and I'd like to see more of these.
I'd like to show you some awesome nature related work from more or less unknown artists which deserve more attention - this is a must see, you won't regret it!!!
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I'm a lover of visual impacts. I like brilliant colors and shapes. And I decided to collect a whole stack of deviations that reflect that taste. These pieces showcased below deserve every bit of publicity you can give them. x)P
^Ikue has been a devious member of our community for almost 7 years and in this time he has proven to be nothing short of dedicated and devoted. Whilst volunteering his time over the last 22 months as a Gallery Moderator within the Community Relations Team, Chris has brought the Vector gallery and many vector artists directly into the spotlight. ^Ikue's commitment to the community is evident in everything he touches and you can always find him reaching out to others with an encouraging word. Chris is a natural leader with a vibrant and empathic personality, and is a role model for deviants everywhere. It's ev... Read More
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