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green memories by gnato green memories by gnato
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old times old buildings.

room without girl [link]


see you on facebook ;) [link]
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:iconmadamecadaverousdoom:
I was first drawn to this picture because it's green (favourite color) and also it was different from all the soft porn I was seeing. That aside.

I adore the tone and lighting of this shot; the ambience draws me in and makes me wish I was there, the peeling of the walls makes me want to pick at them, and as the title suggests, it would bring back memories.

My only issue is the model. While others think she fits, I think she looks out of place. If she were, perhaps, sitting at the desk as if writing her memoirs in a large book, crouched against the far wall in angst with her hands holding her head, it may convey a stronger emotion through such a fine photo.

I personally ADORE defunct buildings, so much inspiration from a place where someone used to live or exist. This is probably one of the best I've seen.

P.S. I would actually think she'd look better on the other image sitting on the chair.
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SilverInkblot May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! I've used the title of this piece in a poem for of my Found Poetry Project :heart:
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:iconvoyagernoel66:
I love the composition and gritiness. This photo conveys a thousand tales...
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thestargazer23 Jun 4, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
those colors - that great amazing old abandoned room - really beautiful =)
Would have been great if the model were sitting on the chair at the desk instead of swinging around her arms, this would have added more atmosphere.
Anyway it`s a nice shot.
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Villesgodgirl May 29, 2010
featured here -> [link] :)
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Story-OfMyEyes May 14, 2010  Professional Photographer
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KiaraBlackPhotograph Apr 2, 2010  Professional Photographer
You've been featured in my Inspire Works April 2010 newsarticle.
Please take the time and :+fav: it, so that it get more attention
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MistyTableau Mar 29, 2010   Photographer
featured here: [link]
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Hi :) Your excellent image is featured here => [link]
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OpportunisticPhotog Mar 1, 2010  Professional Photographer
What a cool location!
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lazyblazin Feb 11, 2010   Photographer
lovely mix of textures and tones....
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