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 i cant critique cos im not a member, but heres my best try:
although this room is delapitated, the paint is peeling off the walls and it is very dirty and quite bare, you have managed to give it life through use of the natural lighting and the model. the model is very peaceful looking and this ties in nicely with the green colour, which (correct me if im wrong) is associated with the feeling calm. this is quite an acheivment considering it looks as if it would be so gloomy and dark. you have breathed new life into this room! amazing work, well done :3  i love the location!
  fair critique
 thank you for taking time and looking near on this photo best wishes from vienna city. -- - see you [link]  The beautiful and graceful model makes up for the room's decrepitude! Nice pose, texture, light, colour and composition.
-- I went to see your pictures...I spread them across the floor... So this is where they are shown...Now they're probably saying to you... If you keep it up you'll be born. --Jane's Addiction  I love it...
 -- Begging you to sit for a portrait on the wall, To hang in the dark of some parliamentary hall. i love the colour, very juxtopposed to the theme of the chaos and the delapidation of the surroundings
well done-- ooo, black and white, how very nior of you  You got the 3D look alright!
oh yay :3 my first critique
no problem!   I love that crumbling wall and the ceiling. And the light is just amazing.
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I adore the tone and lighting of this shot; the ambience draws me in and makes me wish I was there, the peeling of the walls makes me want to pick at them, and as the title suggests, it would bring back memories.
My only issue is the model. While others think she fits, I think she looks out of place. If she were, perhaps, sitting at the desk as if writing her memoirs in a large book, crouched against the far wall in angst with her hands holding her head, it may convey a stronger emotion through such a fine photo.
I personally ADORE defunct buildings, so much inspiration from a place where someone used to live or exist. This is probably one of the best I've seen.
P.S. I would actually think she'd look better on the other image sitting on the chair.
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