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NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D700
Shutter Speed
1/40 second
Aperture
F/3.2
Focal Length
35 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Nov 12, 2012, 12:01:52 AM
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Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 4.2 (Windows)
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1. Lens correction:
a) perspective - look at the edges of buildings,
b) distortion - but I am not sure, maybe when you will improve perspective, will be OK. Try:)
c) vignette - at the sky could be, but now it is very uneven.
2. Colours are great, one building is white. But I am thinking about contrast - maybe a little bit more could be OK, because there is problem with deep black - I can not find it (my monitor is OK:) But do not overdo it!
3. Crop - could be better if you will cut ~0,5cm from base to remove roofs from corners. Or maybe much hire to show only the highest buildings to emphasize the fog? Maybe the best could be to show more buildings with streets. Or only this buildings at the corners.
It is my opinion, if you like to hear:) I think that panorama could be great from that place.

Generally, it is very nice photo! But you should improve perspective, it is the most important thing now.

Cheers!
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the colors make this piece feel like a dream, i love how all of the lights are on, and it seems like it's half night time and half day light.

i think the composition might need a little work but overall, it's such an amazing photograph, i printed it out and show some people, everyone loved it, i hope to see more of this style in your gallery.

i lived in nyc for a few years in midtown, and this photograph is haunting, like a memory yet a dream, a dream yet a piece of reality that is still there today.
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chun11 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
Amazing lighting and atmosphere that you've captured!
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foureyes Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
:+fav:
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gnato Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Professional Photographer
;)
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oasota Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
This Photo is Amazing! Thank you for the inspiration! [link]
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gnato Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Professional Photographer
:hug:
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33xiT Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Nice capture!
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Awstein Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
This is absolutely amazing. The crispness of the architecture and the softness of the light make it some sort of ideal cityscape. I'm adding it to our group gallery, I hope you don't mind :)
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dragonfly-oli Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Hello.
You are one of the finalists of #Breathtaking-photos's Others-folder.
If you win this poll, you will be featured the whole next week.
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Have a nice week!
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AruSung Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013   Photographer
:wow: Amazing!
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cassie93 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
This photo is featured here: [link] :love:
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