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Amazing! 
i think the composition might need a little work but overall, it's such an amazing photograph, i printed it out and show some people, everyone loved it, i hope to see more of this style in your gallery.
i lived in nyc for a few years in midtown, and this photograph is haunting, like a memory yet a dream, a dream yet a piece of reality that is still there today.
a) perspective - look at the edges of buildings,
b) distortion - but I am not sure, maybe when you will improve perspective, will be OK. Try
c) vignette - at the sky could be, but now it is very uneven.
2. Colours are great, one building is white. But I am thinking about contrast - maybe a little bit more could be OK, because there is problem with deep black - I can not find it (my monitor is OK
3. Crop - could be better if you will cut ~0,5cm from base to remove roofs from corners. Or maybe much hire to show only the highest buildings to emphasize the fog? Maybe the best could be to show more buildings with streets. Or only this buildings at the corners.
It is my opinion, if you like to hear
Generally, it is very nice photo! But you should improve perspective, it is the most important thing now.
Cheers!
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